Grammar Check :

A little business communication :
Tips 
Avoid wordiness. 
Don't say: On a daily basis. Say: Daily. 
Don't say: In order to. Say: To. 
Don't say: The majority of. Say: Most. 
Don't say: Take into consideration. Say: Consider. 
Don't say: At this point in time. Say: Now. 
Don't say: As of late. Say: Lately. 
Don't say: During the course of. Say: During.